Hmm…somehow something is not quite right sorry sorry, felt a little inconsistency with some photos having border and some not the choice of colours for the sub-headings… hmm think pink is not a good choice, the “Befriending” sharp pink is a bit too outstanding compare to the rest? hehe just personal aesthetic perspective of the banner
Firstly, appreciate the effort in revising the banner.. to make it more colourful. I like the logo besides our name.. However, my first impression is there’s too much white space.. feels empty. Maybe the photos can be enlarged since the photos are the “selling point” of the banner instead of the words..Also, the layout of the photos are a little too rigid?.. I echo Rico’s comments about the borders (but dunno y her computer shows the “befriending” as bright pink.. we see it as red le?!) .. Lastly, the colour for “Snacks” & “Art & crafts” should be different since the others are different from one another. And if to use the first banner, the colour of “moral angels” does not appear to stand out against the similiar tone background… Guess this is enough comments for the day! =)
hahaha okok the “Befriending” is in some sort of red which is a bit too sharp. I thought “Snacks” and “Arts & Crafts” are of different colours, dont know why they appear the same on shuhua’s computer?? Oh yes, there’s a bit too much of empty space, maybe can enlarge the photos a bit? As for arrangement of the photos, it is rigid but i think it is pretty neat hehe sorry sorry think we have killed enough of your brain cells
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btw, the photos are not updated yet. Will be using different set of photos in the final version.
Hmm…somehow something is not quite right
sorry sorry, felt a little inconsistency with some photos having border and some not
the choice of colours for the sub-headings… hmm think pink is not a good choice, the “Befriending” sharp pink is a bit too outstanding compare to the rest?
hehe just personal aesthetic perspective of the banner
No need to be sorry, pls give your honest comments. This should be a team effort, keep those feedback coming..
Hey, I like the 2nd poster. It’s beautiful and attractive.
Firstly, appreciate the effort in revising the banner.. to make it more colourful. I like the logo besides our name.. However, my first impression is there’s too much white space.. feels empty. Maybe the photos can be enlarged since the photos are the “selling point” of the banner instead of the words..Also, the layout of the photos are a little too rigid?.. I echo Rico’s comments about the borders (but dunno y her computer shows the “befriending” as bright pink.. we see it as red le?!) .. Lastly, the colour for “Snacks” & “Art & crafts” should be different since the others are different from one another. And if to use the first banner, the colour of “moral angels” does not appear to stand out against the similiar tone background… Guess this is enough comments for the day! =)
hahaha okok the “Befriending” is in some sort of red
which is a bit too sharp. I thought “Snacks” and “Arts & Crafts” are of different colours, dont know why they appear the same on shuhua’s computer??
Oh yes, there’s a bit too much of empty space, maybe can enlarge the photos a bit? As for arrangement of the photos, it is rigid but i think it is pretty neat
hehe sorry sorry think we have killed enough of your brain cells
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